Wednesday 22 July 2020
Writing
Hi guys this week for writing we had to look at a picture and write about it. There was a forest and a gingerbread house. Has you can see I have Written some words about both of the texts. I have tried to use feeling, verbs and other things like that do you think I have done those things if not how to make it better?
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