Hi guys welcome back to other blog, this blog is going to be about writing. For writing this week we carried on with our speech. We had to get someone to write a comment on someone else speech to make it better, so I did Ryan my brother and he write a comment for me. The yellow is what I work on and the white is what I already wrote.
Have you done a speech? what was it about?
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