Thursday, 23 April 2020
Sir John Kirwan
For writing finished my report on Sir John Kirwan. This week my goal is revise and rework my own writing for clarity, impact and purpose. I also had to proofread for spelling, grammar and punctuation. I have included this so you can see the difference when some writing has been edited. After I finished this I was able to make a poster about what the top 3 things you need to remember when you are editing, because I learnt this when editing my own work.
Can you tell the difference between the old and new work?
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