Thursday 23 April 2020
Sir John Kirwan
For writing finished my report on Sir John Kirwan. This week my goal is revise and rework my own writing for clarity, impact and purpose. I also had to proofread for spelling, grammar and punctuation. I have included this so you can see the difference when some writing has been edited. After I finished this I was able to make a poster about what the top 3 things you need to remember when you are editing, because I learnt this when editing my own work.
Can you tell the difference between the old and new work?
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